The Ageless Forest

The Ageless Forest


Knowledge branches bear
Root deeply before my birth
Touch disappears green



08/23/10
6:27pm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 9, 2010 at 9:47 PM
Jimbo; Tree's are one of my passion's. I loved how you tied wisdom of ageless splendor with these mighty sentries. Hope your mother gets well.
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August 25, 2010 at 2:50 PM
things dat makes ya go "hmmmmmmm" how my Jimbo? Light & Love
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August 25, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Hi Mr. Goff ! This is, though a concise write, an excelent Senryu, depicting the you who i have come to know through your poetry since I have been reading you ! Great write Sir, and many more I hope to read ! Have a great day ! james
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August 23, 2010 at 8:42 PM
Smile ~ "Hello Dear Blessed & Talented Mr. James Marshall Goff!!!" ~ I am a big fan of "Yours" by the way my friend; always stop when around to view "Your Profound & Brilliant Verse!!!" ~ This causes myself to consider perhaps, the indwelling Heavenly Spirit given before birth, only to be poisoned by the shadows amid this world...."Magnificent Poem" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You & Yours Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening, Blessed By The Light From Above;" Bye!:) ~
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August 23, 2010 at 7:14 PM
Wow! Hi James :) I haven't been on here in many moons. Thanks for your comment and love the "knowledge branches" set forth. I quit writing some time ago. Maybe I'll get back to it some day :) Keep up the great poems!
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August 23, 2010 at 6:43 PM
What a nice use of images to convey your thought, James
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