The Ageless Forest

The Ageless Forest Knowledge branches bear Root deeply before my birth Touch disappears green 08/23/10 6:27pm

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Lena Pate

Date: 11/9/2010 9:47:00 PM

Jimbo; Tree's are one of my passion's. I loved how you tied wisdom of ageless splendor with these mighty sentries. Hope your mother gets well.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/25/2010 2:50:00 PM

things dat makes ya go "hmmmmmmm" how my Jimbo? Light & Love

James Peranteau

Date: 8/25/2010 6:42:00 AM

Hi Mr. Goff ! This is, though a concise write, an excelent Senryu, depicting the you who i have come to know through your poetry since I have been reading you ! Great write Sir, and many more I hope to read ! Have a great day ! james

John Rhinem

Date: 8/23/2010 8:42:00 PM

Smile ~ "Hello Dear Blessed & Talented Mr. James Marshall Goff!!!" ~ I am a big fan of "Yours" by the way my friend; always stop when around to view "Your Profound & Brilliant Verse!!!" ~ This causes myself to consider perhaps, the indwelling Heavenly Spirit given before birth, only to be poisoned by the shadows amid this world...."Magnificent Poem" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You & Yours Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening, Blessed By The Light From Above;" Bye!:) ~

Teresa Harr-Pena

Date: 8/23/2010 7:14:00 PM

Wow! Hi James :) I haven't been on here in many moons. Thanks for your comment and love the "knowledge branches" set forth. I quit writing some time ago. Maybe I'll get back to it some day :) Keep up the great poems!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/23/2010 6:43:00 PM

What a nice use of images to convey your thought, James