The Adversary of God

The Adversary of God

It's been said
To dream a little dream
To gather the extreme
To exploit your angers
To worship your fears
The Creator of all question
You enter your confrontation
Of where fear meets reality
So strange, deranged psychedelic
Please rain
A champagne whirlwind spins
Creates a Great Storm
Blasting through
Fuqqing all the forgotten dead
"Necrophelliac I am"
Said the tall green man
"Let me inject my love into your veins.  For I am half man so Big and Strong.
The other half, snake.  Blackened soul".  
This world in my eyes so far and away
So strange, deranged
Psychedelic
Just rain
And the champagne whirlwinds spin creates the greatest storm blasting through
And he fuqqed all of the forgotten dead
And he fuqqed, he fuqqed 
Until they bled 
This world in my eyes
So far and away
So strange, deranged
Psychedelic
Please rain
So pass this kiss around 
   and around
You blow this kiss around
   and around
And everyday as the day's gone
   good
You fuqqed this kiss so big and      round
This world in my eyes
So far and away
This thrill in disguise
Cum laughing
Come play
This fuqq so strange
So fuqqing deranged
   And the psychedelics?
It's just my God Damned 
                                       RAIN........




Contest-- The Green-Eyed Monster   sponsored by Verlena S. Walker
1-2-2015
*** 1st PlaCe***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/16/2015 12:45:00 AM
Hi Christian:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you. ((regarding the bottom reply)) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/3/2015 6:43:00 AM
Interesting and fantastic write on the theme of jealousy, congrats on the win, Christian
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Christian Alexander
Date: 1/6/2015 8:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram. I appreciate you taking the time to post a comment.
Date: 1/3/2015 1:51:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win Christian.. huggs
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Christian Alexander
Date: 1/6/2015 8:34:00 AM
Thank you KAYOD5. I'll write for huggs any day. ;)
Date: 1/2/2015 11:27:00 PM
CHRISTIAN, Congratulations on your win. Awesome "Green-Eyed Monster, poem." Love LINDA
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Christian Alexander
Date: 1/6/2015 8:47:00 AM
Thank you LINDA. A compliment from you is so very special to me .
Date: 1/2/2015 2:40:00 PM
many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Christian Alexander
Date: 1/6/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thank you very much Jan. I'm always willing to write for hugs. I appreciate you taking your time to read and post a comment.
Date: 1/2/2015 2:33:00 PM
As a winner of my contest, I congratulate you! Verlena
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Christian Alexander
Date: 1/6/2015 9:04:00 AM
Dear Verlena, thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to display my work to our readers in a forum of your choice. This is the very first time I've ever entered a contest, and I came in first. Wow. I am so elated. You will always have a special place in my heart.
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