The Adored Ones

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they are so many in the heart each holds a place as stars own the night the green butterflies likewise seek a sweetness source in fields of beauty arrested they march to the drumbeat of the heart helpless and captive

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/3/2021 8:09:00 PM

Wow! That third stanza is fascinating. Awesome haiku, Evelyn! Have a Wonderful Week, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/3/2021 8:35:00 PM

It's so rewarding to read remarks like yours. So, I offer a warm and sincere thank you. Do enjoy your first full week of the new year as well.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/3/2021 1:16:00 AM

A gem of a poetic cameo. Loved it. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/3/2021 9:17:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. :=)

Judy Ball

Date: 1/2/2021 6:05:00 PM

I love butterflies. God Bless, JB Sorry been gone so long. Was in hospital with ruptured appendix.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/2/2021 7:53:00 PM

Thank God you're feeling better, Judy. It's so good to have you back. Best wishes for the new year, Evelyn.