Notes About The Poem

The Adored Ones

they are so many
in the heart each holds a place
as stars own the night

the green butterflies
likewise seek a sweetness source
in fields of beauty

arrested they march
to the drumbeat of the heart
helpless and captive
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Wolf Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 8:09 PM
Wow! That third stanza is fascinating. Awesome haiku, Evelyn! Have a Wonderful Week, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 8:35 PM
It's so rewarding to read remarks like yours. So, I offer a warm and sincere thank you. Do enjoy your first full week of the new year as well.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 1:16 AM
A gem of a poetic cameo. Loved it. ~~
Buehler Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:17 AM
Thank you, Victor. :=)
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:05 PM
I love butterflies. God Bless, JB Sorry been gone so long. Was in hospital with ruptured appendix.
Buehler Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 7:53 PM
Thank God you're feeling better, Judy. It's so good to have you back. Best wishes for the new year, Evelyn.
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