The Addicts

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Poetic Form: Haiku

Inspired: 2023 February 06

Image: Sunflowers at Night by Flickr

Sunflowers at Night | Mark Weaver | Flickr

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

showy sunflowers natural light towers bright~~ night tides a bent field

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2023 7:55:00 AM

Amazing how their heads bow when the sun is away. They need the sun to be their best. I enjoyed reading this one. Your presence at my poem was delightful. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/7/2023 8:07:00 AM

Sara, the pleasure was mine to which I extend likewise to your analysis, thank you and Aloha William

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/6/2023 9:01:00 AM

Loved this haiku, William. You did an excellent job at evoking both the addict and the sunflowers.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/6/2023 10:33:00 AM

Generous remarks, Lasaad, that succeeds interpretation, thanks my friend, and Aloha William