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The Absence of Your Love

When your love feels absent I feel a tear drop Down my cheek like the rain Drops they pour over me, Like a shower of sadness. The absence of your love, Destroys my mind Like a wrecking ball It Crashes into me, and my heart bleeds As i call your name, I cry once more. When i feel your love is absent, Scape my kness in prayer, Trying to crawl back into your heart, The pain is agonizing I call to my ancenstors. Crucially this love burns I am in hell for being stupidly inlove This love is ravishing, When your love feels absent I drown in the love i have.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/11/2025 10:13:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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Date: 10/10/2016 4:58:00 PM
Timothy this is a sad poem that made my eyes water, I felt a lot of pain in your poem.Even so, I enjoyed it.
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