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The Abc's of Life

B follows A
And C proceeds D
It's a formula older than time

The lowest sink of
   debauchery to the ilks 
Of a sort seem sublime

A pail full of
Crabs
Will stay to the brim

Each holding the
Other
In place

That none should struggle
Perchance to escape
the fate some have 
Chosen to face


As the pails contents
Scramble and roil
And the water before them
Comes to a boil


They gleefully chortle 
To this hope that is mine
Don't be afraid the water is fine

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Date: 5/16/2022 8:04:00 PM
Greetings Vickey, Oh to believe the water is fine even as it boils and bubbles. I am with the crustaceans - stay out of the hot, hot water for as long as one can. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes, Brian
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 5/18/2022 7:14:00 PM
Actually dear it's the majority of the crustaceans rooting for the scalding dip.The one their seeking to share in this fate they hold solidly by the leg .BECAUSE as 1 Peter 4:4 says because you do not continue running with them in their course Of decadent debauchery they speak abusively of you. This is an illustration of the pecking order in operation.You are different therefor suspect.The flock joining in attack.I am used to being misunderstood but I truly appreciate your giving it a go.Thanks

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