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The Forbidden Time Question Word

THE FORBIDDEN TIME QUESTION WORD What we know is that the forbidden word means at what time, during what period? Happily it also means during the time that, at the moment that - All easy enough to skirt around grammatically. Though can we skirt the really difficult issue with just a nod? What kids are always preoccupied with is questions of time - they sigh, Hoping against hope, as if they doubted the future Entirely. They ask how or what or who or why Rarely as often as this time question. Each kid seems to need non-stop clock-measure close by. Where time is concerned, it has great significance for a small child. How can we ask a one-year-old to wait a week? It’s asking for 2 percent of his life. You ask a five-year-old to wait a month - again you’ve cut out 2 percent with your knife. Why ! - asking a three-year-old to wait a month before an expected treat (say) Has the same time-impact as asking me to stand and wait about two years for a seat. If I express it more urgently, if you ask a three-year-old to wait Calmly for an hour for the toilet, it is like asking me to wait nearly a whole day. Hopefully no one will ask me to wait thus. Which is really getting us nowhere. What man really cares much? He can wait if patient; or act if impatient. How long will he wait? Only he knows which hour of the clock will be his deadline. Who else can know? No one can really know, for we have no word to express it. ………………………………………………… Written by Sydney Peck for Paula Swanson’s Contest “When”

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Date: 6/12/2011 1:51:00 PM
LOL I never thought of the kid thing that way! Good for YOU, good man..but I already knew that! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:10:00 PM
Another great victory for you!!!
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Date: 5/3/2011 12:32:00 PM
Great write, congratulations on your win. Emma
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:45:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Syd. Awesome piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/3/2011 4:39:00 AM
Congrats Syd on your HM in Paula's contest with this fantastic write luv.. let us enjoy our HM's together for excellence .. great honor...
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Date: 5/3/2011 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Syd in Paula's "When" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2011 11:19:00 PM
Very thought-provoking approach you have here, Sydney! Enjoy reading this one! Way to go for being in the winners' list :)
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Date: 5/2/2011 9:50:00 PM
The challenge wonderfully met by you, sydney. Congrats on your HM!
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Date: 4/26/2011 1:33:00 PM
This would be a good one on the doc's waiting room wall Sydney! (Signed by the doctor)
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Date: 4/25/2011 5:41:00 PM
How cool! I love the way you danced around the "forbidden word," in your acrostic, Syd. One day, the clock will strike and we will know our time is up. Best wishes for success in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn
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