The 4th Grade Circus

They walked on stilts, used hula hoops,
Did devil sticks and juggled balls,
Raised spinning plates and, in their groups,
They followed all the leader’s calls.

The 4th grade students who performed 
Had practiced just for 3 quick days,
Yet when into the gym they stormed,
Their new-found knowledge did amaze.

All dressed alike, in black and white,
They confidently showed their skills 
And to their kith and kin’s delight
Their acts produced both cheers and thrills.

They weren’t perfect, but for sure,
No matter if they made a goof,
Their joy was obvious and pure,
Their beaming faces perfect proof.

Who would have thought a circus crew
Could do such magic in a week,
As kids found talents no one knew,
All unexpected and unique.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 1:28 AM
A lovely picture, nothing looks better than a set of innocent student performers, Ilene:)
Volumes Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 11:11 PM
Honestly I didn't want that to end. You nailed it for me Ilene. I want to be able to read that again if I am in a melancholy mood. It goes right into my favorites and I hope it lands in the POTD list too. Well done.
Wolf Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 6:55 PM
Hmm. An actual circus?! No kidding?! So much better than the 'circuses' that exist in many 4th grade classes today. Enjoy!! :) gw
Turner Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 5:51 PM
Could this be the voice of a proud granny? Smiling all the way, Ilene:)
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