The 2nd :Through the Lens:

Reading between thin lines, holes begin to appear 
   Not redactions or errata, pixelation becomes clear 

   Cross within a circle, new configuration's designed 
   Simultaneously hits home, blowing away our mind


By
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Flaherty Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 11:28 AM
Fantastic straight lines David No holes here Mind blown
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 12:11 PM
The mind blown is perhaps the biggest hole, when your in the crosshairs of a snipers sights, cheers David
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