Thawing Once Again

worm moon shines through rain slushy snowmelt on vast plains winter in full drain By David Kavanagh

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Sand Blown

Date: 4/3/2022 11:24:00 PM

...may balance be with you....a moon-lit... ...'evening' of...your day......stan

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/4/2022 2:03:00 AM

Thank you stan, hopefully not all down the drain, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/3/2022 2:39:00 PM

Good one David, winter in its dying moments, heard the forecast saying it'll get colder with chance of snow. Come on spring we need you. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/3/2022 2:52:00 PM

Crazy weather Tom, seems to be taking 1 step forward and then 2 back, we’re out on a limb here near the Atlantic, cheers David