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Thawed Thoughts

I thought I saw a thaw
Turns out it was naught
This cold can start to gnaw
More than it really ought

The road, with danger fraught
Ice had us in its maw
And travelers got caught
Horrendous pile-ups saw

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Gershon Wolf

December 27, 2022 at 8:06 PM

I think your first line is an excellent tongue-twister. Say it fast 10x: "I thought I saw a thaw."

Jeff Kyser

December 28, 2022 at 2:07 AM

I thawt I taw a puddy tat

David Kavanagh

December 27, 2022 at 5:21 AM

I’ve seen the images on tv Jeff, a brutal winter storm ruining so many lives across the US, as far as the thaw is concerned I hope it comes soon to all those affected, cheers David

David Kavanagh

December 27, 2022 at 8:21 AM

Good stuff Jeff I’m delighted it was no more than an inconvenience for your daughter and family, could’ve been so much worse, from what I’ve seen on the news!

Jeff Kyser

December 27, 2022 at 7:09 AM

It really caught North Alabama by surprise - roads all over the place iced over in minutes, left hundreds, if not thousands, stranded, parking their cars and waking home. Weird! We were happy as clams, inside and warm, but our daughter and family, visiting a friend not far away, had to spend the night with them!

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