Bryn Strudwick Poet Rhyme

That's Better

HAT’S BETTER

When I let one loose in the elevator, 
I couldn’t help but grin,
And said, without embarrassment,
“That’s better out than in.”

No-one was offended,
Nobody gave a groan,
Nobody even noticed,
I was in there all alone

6th August 2021
When I Let One Loose in the Elevator contest
Sponsor - Charles Messina

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Delice Arleen Skelly August 9, 2021 at 10:20 PM Dear Bryn, Having an early morning smile reading about smells in the elevator. Well done and congratulations...Delice Reply

Terry Flood August 9, 2021 at 3:38 PM Bryn, go on confess... you prayed to every God you ever heard of that Sultry Sanita from the Library didn’t get in when you got out. Congrats on your wind... I mean win. Terry

Jan Allison August 9, 2021 at 3:00 PM Now being alone when you fart has to be the best bit lol and you leave the scent for the next occupants lol, with many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds August 9, 2021 at 2:30 PM That’s hilarious Bryn, content flows well. Congratulations… Belle

Kim Rodrigues August 9, 2021 at 7:33 AM Best to be alone when you let one out! Congratulations!

Charles Messina August 9, 2021 at 6:26 AM LOL Bryn, I loved this! Too funny...thanks for the laughs. Congratulations on your top win, Hugs Charlie

Indiana Shaw August 6, 2021 at 7:18 AM Ha, ha, ha, this one should go down well . . . ; )