That Woman Over There

That Woman Over There

The way she talks,
  Makes my heart stop.
She makes me want to talk,
  Stops me cold from my tough walk.
She makes me go crazy,
  Cause she’s got the way of a lady.
She makes the pain drop,
  Makes the clock stop.
Time stands still,
  When it’s her voice I hear.
She is my addiction,
 Makes me forget the affliction.
I had years of pain,
  I started to go insane.
Then she came into my life,
  And the stars shined bright.
That woman over there,
  I want her over here.
I want her to stay longer than a while,
  Cause she knows just how to make my heart smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 18, 2011 at 6:30 AM
Interesting work that you have written..She must be a role model for you..Sara
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