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That Winchester's Blast

. As I stalked the dust clouds headed westward and moved in mine red hide for the closer vision that beating was not our tribes buffalo skinned drums it was my Shoshone born heart as mine eyes intently stared at that ta-ba-bone sylph My bow and arrow I quickly replaced with the wild grass lands flower and like our mountains lion I crept besides her pearly white flesh Her trembling hand reached for mine gift... instantly as our hands began to mesh I felt the hot flash of her fathers wrath Inspired by Deborah Guzzi's, Westward movement. Ta-ba-bone was a Shoshone ("one coming from the Sun, East") word for a white person.

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Date: 7/1/2010 12:09:00 PM
This sound like you was in for a real treat. The sword has two edges. I like the imagery in this poem and how they flow. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/17/2010 2:00:00 PM
Great idea for the competition should do well up there in the top...Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 5/15/2010 9:36:00 AM
This "white-eyes" loves your work. I hope the "hot flash" was not a descending tomahawk.Love, daver
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Date: 5/15/2010 7:43:00 AM
James,it seems you are like me when it come to contests. .but you are a much greater writer than I am,you should take part..a great poem indeed,Happy wkend to you and dearest Noah. .Charma.
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:06:00 AM
I can not tell you what it meant to me to be able to read your poetry today James. I wish you the best in your writing and hope each day takes you to greater heights in it. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:29:00 AM
Well penned poem.
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Date: 5/12/2010 6:09:00 PM
a fitting song of Native Origins, from a gifted Poet, thanks! JP! for your warm comments, also....jamesy
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Date: 5/12/2010 5:24:00 PM
Hey Jamie...give me more story. ;) and hurry to enter not much slots left (Please help me by critiqueing Part 1 When Madness Rides on Moonlight & Part 2...I value your opinion. Soup Mail
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Date: 5/12/2010 2:07:00 PM
funny, ta ta bone, what does it mean? sounds like snooty bones. lol
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Date: 5/12/2010 12:34:00 PM
A wonderful entry James and good luck in Debbie's contest about the Old West.. my entry is Catalog of the Cowboy.. I did my research .. great footnotes too..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/12/2010 11:53:00 AM
An awesome sage straight from the heart of the old West. Great writing, James! (My contest closes tonighta nd there's room for one more entry.) Love, Carolyn
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