That Toe-Tapping Feeling

Some ascribe it to rhythm
    others to rhyme
  The lines have a feeling
    fingers and toes keep the time

  Whatever the case
    be it poem or song
  That hand-clapping, toe-tapping feeling
    tells you ~ 'I belong!'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Romios Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 12:18 PM
I love this! It’s what real pietry is meter and good verse. Pangie cx
Wolf Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 5:54 PM
Thanks for such a nice comment, P! ~ Real Poet, who does his best to write 'real poetry.' Cheers, gw
Lawless Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 4:53 AM
Oh, the rhythm, meter, and cadence of life....wait....I hear that distant drummer...keep tapping out the tune Gershon
Wolf Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 5:58 PM
That distant runner is Paul Revere ~ Lost his horse with no name
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 2:00 AM
what a fun poem GW I will be dancing at classes 3 days this week - I deserve hand claps for that feat lol:-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 6:06 PM
OK Twinkle-toes. ~ Tu Left Feat
Tor Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 11:21 PM
Reminds me of the old coke commercial. " I'd like to give the world a coke" your idea is better...
Wolf Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 6:10 PM
That's because I'm 'a whole generation!' (Pepsi, 1980's).
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 2:02 AM
I've got that tune in my head now thanks Michael lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Hawkins Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 9:44 PM
We will all get along When we sing a song Loud and clear For all the world to hear That will help to alleviate The situations we hate Gershons, song Titled 'I belong' Will sooth our souls And make us whole
Wolf Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 9:46 PM
Let's keep tapping our toes, fellow soles/souls! Smiles, Gershon
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