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There is a face lives in my mind, has been there since my birth It may have been quite blurred at first, imagination knew it's worth I knew what I was looking for, though times I must admit I thought I saw you here or there, would feel like I'd been hit As I grew up I saw you less, my mind would be elsewhere So busy with my life as such, I seemed without a care Then one day I was walking, on a beach down near the waves I saw your face there in the foam, it brought back early days But this time it was far more clear, with substance and 3D I knew I had to start again, search for the one for me I took a holiday from work, to travel round the world Hoping fate would take me to you, my life became unfurled Once I had been a steady lad, but that was in the past I'm sure if I can find you, there will be a love to last Saw many girls so beautiful, I traveled here and there But I never saw the one, to lay my feelings bare My life went on I met my wife, the hole was always there The face I had been searching for, could not find anywhere Then when my baby daughter born, stood rooted in my place The little girl my wife gave me, that tantalising face

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Date: 2/16/2024 10:42:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/3/2023 6:42:00 PM
How lovely, you have been truly blessed with that tantalising face… Belle
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