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“That Small Space”


Written in song style and melody of Hunter Hayes’ “In A Song”



It was that first look Second was all it took For me to choose Her eyes were so blue Didn't know what to do Was too good to be true My heart raced, didn't know why That time, that place Was meant to be Didn't want to leave The look on her face [Chorus] I smiled… I just said hi… My eyes found hers Her smile liked my try Time stood still Would last until I could win that small space Between her and I... Only heard about moments like this Then we gently kissed Yeah I was close a few times But always missed That arrow of love that sometimes finds These moments that are few I was so sure, I didn't know why But I just knew.. [Chorus] I smiled… I just said hi… My eyes found hers Her smile liked my try Time stood still Would last until I could win that small space Between her and I... Oooh oh mmm mm Oh, mmmmm, mmmm, mm Our eyes were locked And silently talked A friend said let’s go She saw my look of fear Took my hand and began walking slow Didn't want this moment to end We smiled and walked away Knowing we’d meet again Was worth any delay…. [Chorus] I smiled… I just said hi… My eyes found hers Her smile liked my try Time stood still Would last until I could win that small space Between her and I... Yeah, between her and I… Between her and I. mmmm Win that small space… That small… space…

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Date: 12/23/2013 12:26:00 AM
Nice write love at first look, Shawn
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Date: 12/22/2013 5:25:00 PM
Future bliss!
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