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That Place

I sought to find that place in mind, Did I leave it far behind, or is it in amongst the mess of coulds, seldom straying far from shoulds, Maybee I will find it soon, somewhere between sun and moon, or maybee my search is all in vein, oh that though can cause such pain, maybee I should go here instead of there, am I the only one to care, how can I know wich choice is right, my hopes slip sadly out of sight, yet tomorrow is another day, as that place in mind slips away....

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Date: 5/23/2013 11:26:00 PM
I'll try to find "this place in my mind" however, my place slipped away 3 years ago.... It was the enlightenment of my day this place always helped make a difference under my own moon or sky..... Bryan, hope you find that place,,, how about some meditation :-) xox~ Linda
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Date: 5/20/2013 7:07:00 AM
"That place..." we all have one of those in our minds I guess. Well written and welcome to P/Soup
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