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That Other Man Everything was beautiful everything was going just right. Then came along that other man that stole your heart that night. Nothing I could even do as I watched with my own eyes. I saw you were drawn to him as you turned toward his cries. I felt a measure of your love as it went from me to him. I wonder what I'll tell the world? What can I say to them? Without one ounce of anger no jealousy or spite. The day I saw your love for him when you held him that night. Cause I was there beside you when he came in the room. And the doctor set our baby free that was trapped inside your womb. I know he stole your heart away and there's nothing I could do. Because you see when he was born he stole away my heart too. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 5/6/2015 7:05:00 PM
aww you brought tears to my eyes with this one - the final stanza sums up exactly how I felt and still feel about my amazing son - although he is far away he is always in my heart:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 5/6/2015 10:50:00 AM
WHEW! Thought someone had stolen your time...UNTIL,,,Keep it up...three steps past MAGIC thou art!
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