That One Party I Got Drunk At

highscool parties
freshman year
everyone around me
drinking beer
looking around for the water
to put out this fire
the want inside me
makes me tired
but i hve a life ahead of me
a good plan
dont want to waste my time
just find a god man
but then again i have four years
to do anything without
getting a bad rep
wow thats something to think about...
so skrew it, i take a sip or five
never felt so alive
and then dead..


i wake up its dark
im naked
someone on me
im shaking
hes asleep so i run for it
my memory gone
what the hell was i thinking
im gone
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January 19, 2012 at 6:28 PM
Congrats on the poem,...Very truthfull about what can happen early in life
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January 18, 2012 at 3:16 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
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January 17, 2012 at 7:04 AM
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January 16, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Jessica.. CONGRATULATIONS on the week`s winner !!! - :) - oxox love Anne-Lise
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