That Night

I left my house on midnight pale, tudum tudum tudum, My boots were leaving noisy trail, tudum tudum tudum, A little scared i felt at first, too dark, too dark, too dark, I said I always think of worst, too dark, too dark, too dark. I reached the corner of the street, she wept, she wept, she wept, There little girl crouched on bare feet, she wept, she wept, she wept. To home I took a little child, a mute, a mute, a mute, She didn't speak, but only smiled, a mute, a mute, a mute. A little creepy did I deem, to me, to me, to me, Some things were different that they seem, to me, to me, to me, She looked me with her hazel eyes, that night, that night, that night, Was innocence perhaps disguise, that night, that night, that night? Then I remembered what to do, with girl, with girl, with girl How night like this could I push through, with girl, with girl, with girl. Her hazel eyes and youth despite, ring ring, ring ring, ring ring, I ate the girl bite after bite, for I'm Elven King!
Peter Rangus, Ljubljana 22.10.2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/1/2015 11:11:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Peter!
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Date: 11/1/2015 11:03:00 AM
Peter, congratulations. SKAT
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Peter Rangus
Date: 11/1/2015 1:31:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 11/1/2015 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. This one creeped me out.
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Peter Rangus
Date: 11/1/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Richard. I guess you are then just easily creeped out xD
Date: 11/1/2015 1:12:00 AM
Peter, did you win for eating children? That sure was very exceptional and interesting! Congrats! Balveen
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Peter Rangus
Date: 11/1/2015 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Balveen. Well if you put it like this it just sounds like some sick eating contest. :)
Date: 11/1/2015 12:11:00 AM
Peter, unique write with a delightfully wicked ending.
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Peter Rangus
Date: 11/1/2015 1:33:00 PM
Thank you James
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