That Night

Just Like I hoped you would be
was exactly how you were
you came into my life
just like a thief come into someone's house
you came and you stole my heart
you showed me everything I didn't know 
you made me feel so special.
That night, you told me that I was yours
and I thought you were playing
but you took me into your arms
Kissed me like I've never been kissed before
touch slowly with closed attention to every details in my body
you held me so hard I thought I was going to break in two
I was hurting but it felt good at the same time
I screamed but no words came out
I tried again but my lips was already sealed with a kissed
your lips, uhm they felt so good, so soft and waiting to be kissed
your hands, so soft but strong
and with those hands you touched me, held me
make me wish 
wish to bring back that night we had
that special night, I wish it could never end
to have you again with me
the way we were once that night
but I guess that's what make it special

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/23/2011 4:06:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mickerlange. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2011 10:46:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your very creative poetry ...hope u enjoy your time on PS. as u continue to share with luv..your expressive words..
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Date: 5/22/2011 5:12:00 AM
Very nice write. Devotional. Your message comes through very clearly.
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Date: 5/22/2011 3:08:00 AM
Aw i like this one night kiss, so sweet :)
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