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That Magic Night

Oft-times, I'd sit- so dreamlike in a daze- though decades had elapsed, surpassing days they lived next door in sharing fun-filled years; still fancying them here- and, oft with tears. One night, I closed my eyes to simply rest. Before long, deep asleep- I felt distressed by hazy lights fast catching me off guard beside the moonlit pool in our backyard. Two shadowed beings each had waved a hand- and called my name- so I would understand. Then, through the circle of large maple trees, ethereal- they floated with the breeze. My trance-like state of mind said, no! Unreal! The spirits of my mom and dad, surreal- now gliding 'cross the lawn to visit me. Imaginary, this must surely be! It was that night, I closed my eyes to rest- my prayers had sent that vision- truly blessed! There, through the circle of large maple trees- dreamt of my parents- waving in the breeze! July 25, 2021 Premiere Contest: An Interesting Couplet Sponsor: Funom Makama Revision of a poem posted: 05/24/2021

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Date: 8/6/2021 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write and dream. I really enjoyed it. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 8/6/2021 7:08:00 AM
Lovely poem, Sandraq. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 8/6/2021 5:55:00 AM
A big big congratulations to you. Thank you so much for submitting this wonderful piece for my contest. I feel so honoured reading this. Have a lovely day.
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