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That Last Date

The last date of life what can you expect from that? Idk I fell so emotional knowing that I’m dying ....Life sometimes is unprecedented on my personal opinion to be honest I’m scared of that next life I don’t know what to expect but they said changes are good but a hurts me knowing that I’m leaving now without saying goodbye to that ones I love but I know my time here has come and I don’t want to go but that clock is running faster than I expect it... im so emotional because I fall in love for that third time and they say say third time is that charm and that funny thing is that he doesn’t even care about my feelings ??? well if is a way of life teaching a lesson is to late for that I wish I had never meet him because loving him hurts me more than dying...

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Date: 8/19/2019 6:18:00 AM
"loving him hurts me more than dying"- poetic words that hopefully will make more than one woman run from a man. "the last date of life" - loved your title! Poem is very nice.
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Arilene Ramos
Date: 8/19/2019 10:02:00 PM
Thank you !! Sometimes we fall in love with that right person on that wrong timing reason is that I’m dying I’m stage 4 chronic leukemia and I meet him now that my life is ending that hurts me a lot not to be able to show him that way you suppose to be loved ...

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