Michael Wise Poet Rhyme

That January Day

You loved me, this I know
but then you had to go
and things were never quite the same again

On that January day
I kind of lost my way
and those thoughts and feelings just elude my pen

I was but eleven
when you went off to heaven
it was quite a jarring lesson at that age

And now 40 years have passed
since the day I saw you last
when I learned the hard way I must turn the page

You know, I miss you dad
and I would be so glad
if only I could see you once again

When I finally come your way
I’ve a world of things to say
All those feelings once elusive to my pen


© Mike Wise
1/23/17

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Makenlee Peebles January 23, 2019 at 3:13 PM This poem is very relatable. This was a wonderful read. :) Michael Wise January 23, 2019 at 3:29 PM Thank u Makenlee. :)

Caren Krutsinger January 23, 2019 at 12:41 PM A lovely tribute to a father who no doubt watches you from his catbird seat, proud of your poetry, Michael. Michael Wise January 23, 2019 at 1:32 PM Lovely sentiments Caren, thank u! :)

Heidi Sands January 23, 2019 at 9:05 AM A very touching poem. I am sorry to hear of your loss and I know it will be wonderful to see him again :) Well expressed and written ! Michael Wise January 23, 2019 at 9:34 AM Many thanks to you Heidi. Yeah, this day brings good and sad memories. Lost him 42 years ago today, which also happens to be my oldest brother's birthday as well.