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That I Could

Oh that I could breathe you in taste the fragrance of your skin trail my kisses down your spine take you in and make you mine. Oh that I could kiss you deep passion’s flavor and so keep rapture burning in your eyes hear the whisper of your sighs. Oh that I could hold you tight keep you close during the night tender bring you close to me feel your longing be set free. (click on the pic to buy my poetry book!)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/1/2021 8:27:00 AM

Congrats on your winner in this contest. Congrats once again on your book publishing. Sara

Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/3/2021 8:31:00 AM

Thanks so very much Sara!

Gary Radice

Date: 1/1/2021 4:41:00 AM

Another excellent poem, Rob, with your signature 'Levasseur' use of repitition that is used to great effect. Cheers - Gary

Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/3/2021 8:31:00 AM

Gary, thank you kindly. I do like that repetition sometimes too much!

Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/30/2020 7:06:00 PM

A wonderful poem, Rob. I love your rhyming scheme in this. Checked out your book preview. Looks good! :)

Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/31/2020 6:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Angela!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/30/2020 3:08:00 PM

Hi Rob, You have penned such a well-written romantic write. Good content and rhymes as well. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis

Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/31/2020 7:05:00 AM

Hello Alexis, thank you so much for your kind thoughts.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/30/2020 1:40:00 PM

Such a beautiful, romantic poem! Are you in the Soup Anthology? Sending best wishes for better times in 2021. HUgs, Carolyn(You or a friend could do a blog to promote your book. I'd be happy to help.) Carolyn

Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/31/2020 6:56:00 AM

Hello Carolyn, no I don't think I am in the anthology. Thank you for the sentiment! I may make a blog post once I press the publish button tomorrow morning!