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Thanks to you all Thanks to those who come to poetrysoup.com, practise poems, write, read and share poems and comment on others Thanks to those who read my writings, do comments, follow me, avoid my poems, block and ban me from their list Thanks to you all I’ve no eternity here, all of me from least to chest, best to edge, sharpen blade of new paddy leaves jeopardize my torn nib of ink in the field of writings graph Maybe I couldn’t write any word for beauty and stunning young girl in comprehension, in passion and in my fashionable heart Maybe I couldn’t write charming note of flower’s petals, striking fragrance, in my perpetuity lake of quills Maybe I couldn’t draw the sexy body of rose, lotus, tulip, sunflower, orchid, lily, daffodil… etc in my vulnerable reef of poetic expression Maybe I couldn’t draw the colors magic of rainbow in my infatuated fallen soaked feathers with November rain Maybe I couldn’t inscribe the nature the cosmos, the solar system, the ocean, the black hole, the space, the sky, the stars, the planets, the galaxies, the meteors, the gravitational power…etc in my slumbering wings of writings Maybe I couldn’t plant the meditational tree into the pure heart of words, I couldn’t select the seeds of immortality in my ascetic madness and magma script Maybe I couldn’t greet the autonomy flying of Cockatiels, Parakeets, Canaries, Finches, African Grey Parrots, Budgerigars, Cockatoos, Conures, Macaws, Poicephalus…etc in my unintelligible incarcerated language Maybe I couldn’t hail the abode for Labrador, Bulldog, German, Poodle, Beagle… etc and Maine Coon, Egyptian Mau, American Bobtail, Ragdoll…etc in my materialistic harvesting terminology Maybe I couldn’t sleep with power of poems, dream to be a finest classic or modern poet in my kingdom of pen, paper, ink, writing table-chair and lamp Notwithstanding all these, I thanks to those who come here at least one time daily, erratically and read, write, share own thoughts and comment frankly Thanks to you all a lot. Thanks and love you all. From me always ready the rose without thorns and love for you all, although you bleed my heart by thorns stinging -November 14, 2018 Chattogram //// DEDICATED TO POETRYSOUP.COM and ALL POETS-POETESSES OF THIS ESTEEMED LITERARY SITE

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Date: 11/18/2018 2:55:00 AM
Hi Mahtab, I know that whatever I have read of yours has been from the soul and heart, and from an awesome intellectual platform. Best wishes Mahtab, Jennifer
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Date: 11/14/2018 2:49:00 PM
Wow!! What a heartfelt masterpiece, Mahtab. This is an instant FAVE for me. So expressive, such a revealing of oneself ---and such sincere modesty. I admire the poem, and I admire you, the man who wrote it. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 11/14/2018 12:16:00 PM
Well, my young friend, I appreciate the feeling this poem was written . Here is a microcosmic representation of humanity thus you will find all sort of people. "Intelligence is the capacity of adaptability" We all have faced this dilemma one way or the other so I understand you! Wish you to find the way to stay with us and still keep your inner peace so as to be able to contribute to peace at the Soup and elsewhere! Good luck! God bless you! Question : Why don't you thank those who visit you? If you allow me I would advise to make comments on the poem only and to thank those who honor you by visiting your poems! Good luck!
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