Thanks For Rejecting My Book

Dear Editor of blah blah Publishing Thanks for explaining the short comings Too much tell and not enough show What does that mean I'm interested to know Feel see hear and smell What's the best way to incorporate these pray tell Images created visually in the readers mind A skill I'm sure I will learn in time The Book needs a more consistent point of view Something I may have overlooked you see I'm new Can the reader see the scenes that the characters inhibit After I revise my book the sky is the limit Thanks for the advice, it appears to come from someone who's wise Improving my craft is what it's all about I realize My book will be awesome, one of a kind I'll continue writing even though I'm mostly blind Thanks Blah blah Publishing it has been fun Maybe you will like my next written one