Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Thanks Clouds Minuscle

After the storm of yesterday
The fog drifted in cool
Thick_damp covering everything
Thanks clouds minuscule

Out on  the porch so much nicer
Quiet rules the morn
In great fog I am delighted
But fog's wet on the corn

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Jack Horne July 5, 2012 at 4:35 AM I could just imagine being there - wonderful descriptions, my friend

Russell Sivey July 4, 2012 at 12:43 PM This is a very beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed the freshness of the fog in the air, delighting my senses in the coolness of it all! I love poems like this, very soft and astounding! Great Work Sara!!

Nette Onclaud July 4, 2012 at 10:33 AM the message comes through clearly and leaves me pondering with a surprsing ending, sara.... nice job!..huggs!

Jancarl Campi July 4, 2012 at 6:07 AM You have some beautiful images here. I like the last line of this poem. Maybe it is because I like foggy nights and foggy mornings. Take care and enjoy the 4th. Jancarl