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Thanks Clouds Minuscle

After the storm of yesterday The fog drifted in cool Thick_damp covering everything Thanks clouds minuscule Out on the porch so much nicer Quiet rules the morn In great fog I am delighted But fog's wet on the corn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/5/2012 4:35:00 AM
I could just imagine being there - wonderful descriptions, my friend
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Date: 7/4/2012 12:43:00 PM
This is a very beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed the freshness of the fog in the air, delighting my senses in the coolness of it all! I love poems like this, very soft and astounding! Great Work Sara!!
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Date: 7/4/2012 10:33:00 AM
the message comes through clearly and leaves me pondering with a surprsing ending, sara.... nice job!..huggs!
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Date: 7/4/2012 6:07:00 AM
You have some beautiful images here. I like the last line of this poem. Maybe it is because I like foggy nights and foggy mornings. Take care and enjoy the 4th. Jancarl
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