Aaron Klimmek Poet Rhyme

Thanks a Ton

Thanks for ignoring
My pathetic pleas.
Thanks for all
My insecurities.
Thanks for infection
And thanks for disease.
Thanks for nothing;
Just bad memories.

Thanks for teaching me to rise when I fall....
Maybe I’m thankful after all.

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Keith Bickerstaffe December 7, 2008 at 11:29 PM Gratitude is hard to express for many people, especially if there is little to be thankful for... (suggestion: 'thank you' for 'thanks' in lines 3 and 6... better flow I think) Best wishes, Keith

Alina Vitali December 1, 2008 at 8:42 AM I like the honesty! Very good.

Will B December 1, 2008 at 7:19 AM Eih... She was baaad, man. I like short poems, though. To the point.

Michael Jordan December 1, 2008 at 6:23 AM Aaron - Loved the way you expressed yourself in this poem - love the message of hope at the end - God Bless, MJ