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Thanks a Ton

Thanks for ignoring My pathetic pleas. Thanks for all My insecurities. Thanks for infection And thanks for disease. Thanks for nothing; Just bad memories. Thanks for teaching me to rise when I fall.... Maybe I’m thankful after all.

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/7/2008 11:29:00 PM

Gratitude is hard to express for many people, especially if there is little to be thankful for... (suggestion: 'thank you' for 'thanks' in lines 3 and 6... better flow I think) Best wishes, Keith

Alina Vitali

Date: 12/1/2008 8:42:00 AM

I like the honesty! Very good.

Will B

Date: 12/1/2008 7:19:00 AM

Eih... She was baaad, man. I like short poems, though. To the point.

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/1/2008 6:23:00 AM

Aaron - Loved the way you expressed yourself in this poem - love the message of hope at the end - God Bless, MJ