Thomas Stanton Poet Heroic Couplet

Thank You Doris

lament [i have the lyrics]


you don't write me anymore
i had
grown so
dependant
so
needy
so
expecting
some sort of drama
within this
rather
strile
constricted
format
it is good to be king!
©[mb]
i was led
i was to
i was to believe

vacume floating
again
from
mantel
to coal
starved
stove

like
a
windmill
in
a
windfarm
blowing
a
breeze
to
no
one.

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Dorian Petersen Potter September 25, 2009 at 12:19 AM Very nicely expressed.I like this poem, it has a strong message.

Doris Culverhouse September 24, 2009 at 6:10 AM nicley done, keep sharing

Noura Nagy September 24, 2009 at 5:15 AM great writing thomas :) specially the last part is so brilliant :) Noura

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo September 24, 2009 at 5:06 AM A interresting write indeed really like the style and cant say i dont feel this way to be honest really good write Thomas. Strong poem

Sara Kendrick September 24, 2009 at 5:02 AM Love the line "Like a windmill in a windfarm blowing a breeze to no one". Keep writing. Sara