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THANK YOU Doris

lament [i have the lyrics] you don't write me anymore i had grown so dependant so needy so expecting some sort of drama within this rather strile constricted format it is good to be king! ©[mb] i was led i was to i was to believe vacume floating again from mantel to coal starved stove like a windmill in a windfarm blowing a breeze to no one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/25/2009 12:19:00 AM
Very nicely expressed.I like this poem, it has a strong message.
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Date: 9/24/2009 6:10:00 AM
nicley done, keep sharing
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Date: 9/24/2009 5:15:00 AM
great writing thomas :) specially the last part is so brilliant :) Noura
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Date: 9/24/2009 5:06:00 AM
A interresting write indeed really like the style and cant say i dont feel this way to be honest really good write Thomas. Strong poem
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Date: 9/24/2009 5:02:00 AM
Love the line "Like a windmill in a windfarm blowing a breeze to no one". Keep writing. Sara
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