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How could The willows blow without the wind , With no Oxygen, my life with you would Not have begin. Your experiences in this world Is unfair and Cruelty, It's amazing if How hurt you are instead you choose me. Choose me over Every girl. Oh, how lucky I feel, How i feel so wanted. Wanting to be a heal. Heal your heart and protect it from Hurt and misery. Changing It from Me and You, To we, DaMir DaMir D Barry, My love For you Grows stronger Every day I see. I am Greatful to wake Up now Instead of fall Back asleep. You opened My eyes To something better, and I knew it was true. And for that I say Thanks, No, Thank You.

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Date: 6/30/2011 1:26:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as I have enjoyed your amazing creative poetry tonight.. expressive emotions shared with luv..
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Date: 6/30/2011 3:48:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you JaNece. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:52:00 PM
Enjoyed the write nice expressions , JaNece
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