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The place is so dark Feels like unfertilized in an egg shell Can't imagine how to stark Can't hear anything to tell Suddenly a distant door popped and appear Too far from me I can hardly see I was breathing underneath my chest that spear Like an arrow molded to pierce and tee My world where I was standing Began to open and start gleaming You come to me with extended arms With you I sing with open arms Thank you for everything. "Life goes on as we all smile with hope. Keep dreaming because time of your life never offers a nope!" (Prosebite)

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Date: 2/12/2023 10:24:00 AM
that's lovely with such wonderful imagery.
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Clifford Villalon
Date: 2/12/2023 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Miss Nancy. Cliff

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