Thank You

The place is so dark
Feels like unfertilized in an egg shell
Can't imagine how to stark
Can't hear anything to tell

Suddenly a distant door popped and appear
Too far from me I can hardly see
I was breathing underneath my chest that spear
Like an arrow molded to pierce and tee

My world where I was standing
Began to open and start gleaming
You come to me with extended arms
With you I sing with open arms

Thank you for everything.



                "Life goes on as we all smile with hope.
Keep dreaming because time of your life never offers a nope!"

(Prosebite)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kaufman Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 10:24 AM
that's lovely with such wonderful imagery.
Villalon Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Thank you Miss Nancy. Cliff
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