Thank You

for the breast milk and the care I thank you oh dear mother earth







Won second place in One liner Poetry Contest sponsored by Silent One
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Johnson Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 8:14 PM
Congratulations! Well done.
Somadas Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 10:30 PM
Thank you Johnson..
Roper Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 2:25 PM
Jenish, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Somadas Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:30 PM
Thank you Eve..
Gauthier Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Good one, Jenish. Gratitude always goes a long way. Congrats on your podium finish.
Somadas Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:29 PM
Thank you Line..
Neumann Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 1:00 PM
That is an interesting way to put it. Congratulations Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:28 PM
Thank you Kai..
One Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:11 AM
nice one.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Somadas Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:28 PM
Thank you Silent One for placing me and appreciate your effort in conducting this contest..
Lamoureux Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:08 AM
You do well to say thanks.
Somadas Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:50 PM
'Thanks' is the least expression towards the mother.. The mother earth deserves more..
Vdev Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 8:31 AM
No idea how a simple way of writing brings out a flood of feeling in this one. Great lines.
Somadas Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 10:30 PM
Thank you Johnson..
Makama Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:39 AM
Amazing! Amazing! So amazing. So deep, my senses are pulled out to tick a yes in every line. Great work friend.
Somadas Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 10:31 PM
Thank you Funom for reading the poem and your valuable comment..
Buehler Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 11:21 AM
A beautifully written monoku, Jenish!
Somadas Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 11:35 PM
Thank you Evelyn..
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 10:59 PM
Love the gentle twist in this delicious idea, Jenish! Warm wishes, Gershon
Somadas Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 11:16 PM
Thank you Gershon..
Sands Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 10:55 PM
This is so nice! Well done :)
Somadas Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 11:16 PM
Thanks Heidi..
Rose  Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 4:25 AM
sweeter words I never heard.
Somadas Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 7:20 AM
Thank you Pixie..
Theraven Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 11:19 PM
Jenish, This Monoku is a wonder revealed. At least it is to me. -Richard
Somadas Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 11:40 PM
Thank you Richard for your visit and your kind words..
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