Shawn Gorsick Poet I do not know?

Thank U Mr Baldwin

Thanks for the compliments
       My smart phone limits navigation
      Of this sight tho its newest technology
      Well since the technology was
       Bought off despite safety of many
       Corporate selection instead of natural
        Studabaker ruined by big three
        You can't make cars safer you will
      Offer the country something that's
      Not on schedule for thirty years

      But I digress Cause freedom not free
     And its misrepresent in reality
     No one fighting for freedom
     Just upkeep of system cause the
     Scholorship just offered a poor man
     A shot at the spot from them to
    Look down and not notice themselves
      In a so called lesser man
  
      Thank you for applying reason
       To form understanding
      Thank you for seeing poetic visualization
      Instead simple word Smith
      Creative release
      And thank you for creating yourself
      
               Thank u

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William Kershaw December 26, 2010 at 11:42 PM Shawn, I don't know Mr. Baldwin but I am sure he is delighted with this, as am I. Best. Will