Thank U Mr Baldwin
Thanks for the compliments
My smart phone limits navigation
Of this sight tho its newest technology
Well since the technology was
Bought off despite safety of many
Corporate selection instead of natural
Studabaker ruined by big three
You can't make cars safer you will
Offer the country something that's
Not on schedule for thirty years
But I digress Cause freedom not free
And its misrepresent in reality
No one fighting for freedom
Just upkeep of system cause the
Scholorship just offered a poor man
A shot at the spot from them to
Look down and not notice themselves
In a so called lesser man
Thank you for applying reason
To form understanding
Thank you for seeing poetic visualization
Instead simple word Smith
Creative release
And thank you for creating yourself
Thank u
Copyright © Shawn Gorsick | Year Posted 2010
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