David William Breidenthal Poet Verse

Thank U

I have been a bad, bad boy
Eating ramen noodles
Being foolish like wandring fish...having wanderlusts and wonder-lusts (reoccurring lustful scenes in mind) 

Making fart noises
Catfishing on the net...
I'm sorry...
I'm immature
I'm not a cure
I'm a disease
I'm a scar, not healed oh no not at ease 
I guess I was pretending...
This guilt is never ending.

Oh oh not good
Eating too much junk food 
Watching Disney clips
Doing the Miley Cyrus tongue thang
Thang
Thang

Branewashed insane
Driving on my own lane
I'm scared for my life
I'm unprepared for future strife

I'm trying to stay positive
I'm attempting to stay away from negativity 

God...brush my teeth of beseeching over your cleanliness...fill in my cavity. 
God's fruit is delicious to my brains
But, these veins soak in the sounds of a thousand trains 

Goddess Grace
Look at my face...
Leave me a trace
Of royal disgrace 

Thank u
Thank u
Thank u
For making me..
Lord of Accord
But, I'm breaking in envy 

Thank u 
Thank u
Thank u so damn much 
Satan-colored Satan...
For killing me softly

Blood in my mind
Knife next to heart...
You cut me open 
I'm in a dark den...

I am a burden
I am a mistake
I'm a flawless flaw
A dove's ugly caw
I'm handsome
I'm ugly somewhat
I'm numb and dumb
Dumb and numb
Numb and dumb

I'm sorry
I'm sorry
I can hold on

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Anand Parmale April 3, 2016 at 9:51 PM Why this negativity my friend? You are damn good.... Anand Parmale April 8, 2016 at 1:43 AM I wish you to come back stronger and inspire many through your powerful lyrics and poems!!!You are a talented and blessed writer.... David William Breidenthal April 4, 2016 at 11:09 PM I have a condition called bipolar. I wrote this in the perspective of brainwashed teens on Disney Channel. I am striving to be positive still. Thanks for stopping by my page. David William Breidenthal April 4, 2016 at 11:08 PM I have a condition called bipolar. I wrote this in the perspective of brainwashed teens on Disney Channel. I am striving to be positive still. Thanks for stopping by my page.