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S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Than-Bauk's 1

River in spate
Ruler’s great  speech
Our fate unhinged.

Afternoon  sun
Only son comes
When none expects.

The pain that sends
A chill bends will
And rends the heart.

Copyright © S.Jagathsimhan Nair | Year Posted 2011

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Andrea Dietrich

August 13, 2011 at 12:06 PM

Most profound one of the bunch. Congrats on your win!

August 12, 2011 at 5:19 PM

Congrats on your win...Sara

August 12, 2011 at 3:29 AM

hey Jag, congrats on your win David

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 11, 2011 at 11:13 PM

I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Jag. Love, Carol

August 11, 2011 at 10:21 PM

Cool idea Jagathsimhan. Agape, Moses

Robert A. Dufresne

August 11, 2011 at 7:45 PM

congratulations to you S. On your win here

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 11, 2011 at 7:42 PM

Congrats Jag on your solid win with new form and great poetry ..sweet victory luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 11, 2011 at 7:10 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Than-Bauk" contest Jag. Love,Carol

August 11, 2011 at 6:30 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest, S.nair

Andrea Dietrich

August 9, 2011 at 2:16 AM

the middle one is my favorite. Great job for the contest, S!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 8, 2011 at 5:46 PM

Jag these Than-Bauk's are phenomenal luv.. good luck in the contest..luv the reference in the second verse.. awesome for sure..luv..

August 8, 2011 at 4:58 PM

Thanks for the entry, S.nair

August 8, 2011 at 3:28 PM

a wonderful, initmate expression of what must lie within your heart and pen, jag... fascinating! best of winning luck! :) huggs, nette

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