Than-Bauk October 8

Not Henpecked

Not shy, this bird.
Beak’s absurdist
beat, stirred my spouse.

Early Appointment

slip on long pants
coolness paints cheeks
car points the way

Silhouettes at Dawn

Sky is pale blue
as pines shoo dark;
their hue - sable-green.

My Nose is Cold

Not cold enough
without puff gasp.
The bluff is called.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:29 PM
Of course, you're not cold! <3 I guess we can all come across that way, but your insides show in your writing....enjoyed-
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 7:07 PM
Thank you :)
Kauffman Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 11:06 AM
Wonderful images, Kim and delightful rhymes. Love the way to describe an autumn morning! Blessings for your birthday! Happy Birthday!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 5:31 PM
Thank you, Sam! :)
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