Text Mad

The chirps
Of her phone
Always make 
People groan

*Inspired by a girl on my bus in the mornings, who spends the entire journey sending and receiving text messages

For Suzette’s Grook contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 11, 2013 at 10:50 AM
Hi Jack, it was nice seeing your poem on SU's grook contest, Congratulations with your winning poem ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD
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April 8, 2013 at 2:23 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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April 8, 2013 at 8:08 AM
ha annoying to say the least unlike this grook , well done Jack and congratulations xx
Ober Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 1:45 PM
I can definitely relate to this one, Jack! Drives me crazy. Great job with this form!
Collins Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 7:41 AM
Hallelujah. You are wonderful at these gems of the brief. love, Kathy
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March 11, 2013 at 5:25 AM
I think you could be "write" here on this Jack. L O L))
Goff Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 10:23 AM
The age we live....nice, Jack! Jimbo
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March 9, 2013 at 1:37 AM
I love this cute little rhyme of a grook, Jack. Nice to see you doing a new one today.
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March 8, 2013 at 12:26 PM
Remember those cuss words..Well a young lady dropped her phone on which she was receiving a text and she let them fly..Those text were important to her..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Good luck..Reads like winning material to me..Sara
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