Sidney Beck Poet Monoku

Teton Titans

TETON    TITANS



Tetons’  bouldered shoulders close over   Michael’s knelling golden clarion.



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Written for  ^Rick Parise's  Contest   "Nature Monoku ~ Single Line"



NOTE

Just couldn't resist this contest  because the Snake River and
the Tetons in the photo are one of my favorite spots.

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2011 at 12:27 PM Congratulations on a well deserved win in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku" contest Syd. Love, Carol

Nick Bagnall June 8, 2011 at 4:46 AM I must admit you've totally lost me here, I get the Tetons bit from the other comments but where does Michael fit into this ? Oh yeah - congrats on the first place ! Sidney Beck June 8, 2011 at 5:44 AM Thanks for reading me...Michael is the Archangel Michael in the Bible who blows his golden trumpet frequently, in this case to knell the day to a close...best wishes

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2011 at 8:09 PM Hey hey,hey, my prediction was RIGHT. And at the very top! congratulations, Sydney. Spectacular.

Sara Kendrick June 4, 2011 at 5:43 PM Congrats..Sara

Debbie Guzzi June 4, 2011 at 10:47 AM so glad to share the spot with you congrad's on your BIG win! Light & Love

Caryl Muzzey June 4, 2011 at 10:18 AM Congratulations on a wonderful win with this creative verse. Caryl

Carrie Richards June 4, 2011 at 7:20 AM How wonderful Sydney!!! As soon as I saw that picture, I thought of our trip to the Tetons,...................but I didn't think anyone else would recognize where it was....I'm thrilled that you saw it too!! Congratulations!!! Sidney Beck June 13, 2011 at 5:41 AM Carrie, many thanks for liking my poem about the Tetons....indeed since you have a personal interest in the district around those mountains you may find an earlier poem of mine of some small interest.... it's called...FOREST OF NORWAY MAPLES.....i am always pleased to receive a comment from you....i respect you highly...best wishes..Syd

Andrea Dietrich June 1, 2011 at 10:15 PM oh,my gosh, is this snake river? That name came to me out of nowhere but I was afraid to use snake river,not really knowing the name of the one in the picture. It WAS snake river? I'm so silly I did not even know those were the Tetons!! And where ARE the tetons anyway? I predict this one could very well be in the top three! LUv, Andrea