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Tethered To a Moment

Tethered to that moment She shed tears That time when her unborn child died Heaven’s love bestowment Brought no cheers Crushed, teary-eyed…Oh! How she cried! Doctors couldn’t save her child Her heart failed Those awaited baby times gone Dreaming of her, she smiled Then sore wailed ‘twas hard, but she had to move on One day, she’d bear more kids She had hope Her God would not leave her bereft She prayed with closed eyelids She could cope Though she’d ne’er forget her heart’s cleft 08.26.2021 Form: Tri-fall {The Tri-fall, created by Jan Turner, consists three 6-line stanzas, for a total of 18 lines. The rhyme scheme is a,b,c,a,b,c and meter for each stanza is as follows: 6/3/8, 6/3/8. This form requires little to no punctuation and can be written on any subject matter.} For Edward Ibeh's "This or That Vol.6" contest

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Date: 9/8/2021 3:29:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this poignant, powerful write, Jo!:-) Loved it!
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Date: 9/8/2021 10:25:00 AM
Jo, you have expressed so tenderly the experience of a miscarriage - the lost hope, the feeling of emptiness. So many women go through this yet alone without a true support system always wondering of that lost child - tethered in a spiritual way to that child. Wonderfully done. Hats off to you and congratulations. Blessings.
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Date: 9/8/2021 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Tethered To A Moment" is a wonderful yet very sad story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings....................
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Date: 8/26/2021 12:29:00 PM
so sad. Beautifully done. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 8/26/2021 8:35:00 AM
I don't think most of us can understand what a mother who has lost her child, even an unborn child, goes through. You have brought awareness, Jo. Excellent writing.
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Date: 8/26/2021 4:22:00 AM
Such a tragic story that you often hear about Jo. You composed this using a new form very well. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 8/26/2021 3:48:00 AM
A new form. Doesn't look easy but you did wonders with it.
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