Tethered To a Moment


Tethered to that moment
She shed tears
That time when her unborn child died
Heaven’s love bestowment
Brought no cheers
Crushed, teary-eyed…Oh! How she cried!

Doctors couldn’t save her child
Her heart failed
Those awaited baby times gone
Dreaming of her, she smiled
Then sore wailed
‘twas hard, but she had to move on

One day, she’d bear more kids
She had hope
Her God would not leave her bereft
She prayed with closed eyelids
She could cope
Though she’d ne’er forget her heart’s cleft


08.26.2021
Form: Tri-fall

{The Tri-fall, created by Jan Turner, consists three 6-line stanzas, for a total of 18 lines. The rhyme scheme is a,b,c,a,b,c and meter for each stanza is as follows: 6/3/8, 6/3/8. This form requires little to no punctuation and can be written on any subject matter.}


For Edward Ibeh's "This or That Vol.6" contest
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Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this poignant, powerful write, Jo!:-) Loved it!
Kauffman Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 10:25 AM
Jo, you have expressed so tenderly the experience of a miscarriage - the lost hope, the feeling of emptiness. So many women go through this yet alone without a true support system always wondering of that lost child - tethered in a spiritual way to that child. Wonderfully done. Hats off to you and congratulations. Blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 9:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Tethered To A Moment" is a wonderful yet very sad story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings....................
Mcintosh Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 12:29 PM
so sad. Beautifully done. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Hankins Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 8:35 AM
I don't think most of us can understand what a mother who has lost her child, even an unborn child, goes through. You have brought awareness, Jo. Excellent writing.
Cunningham Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 4:22 AM
Such a tragic story that you often hear about Jo. You composed this using a new form very well. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 3:48 AM
A new form. Doesn't look easy but you did wonders with it.
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