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Tested Trust

Glimmers of light shine on a view of mistrust and darkness of deceit Senyru contest...

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Jo Bien

Date: 9/25/2010 11:23:00 AM

phenomenal!! Good write JB (JoAnne)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 2:19:00 PM

A good definition Michael .. believe the contest was judged this morning luv..enjoyed your inspiration today in this piece...

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/19/2010 2:21:00 PM

I likey your entry. Best wishes for the contest ;) luv W

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/19/2010 7:11:00 AM

oh yes this should be in winners circle my friend at this time even that glimmer would make me rethink values also thanks again for your kind comments keep up the great work enjoyed the read blessings and hope this was fictional

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/19/2010 4:04:00 AM

Wish you best of luck with this great Senryu ma friend! Really enjoyed the read!...Gert

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2010 10:57:00 AM

Good luck in the contest. Light conquers all darkness. Trust is just a misguided weakness we all have and need. Enjoyed,..p.d.