Tested Trust

Glimmers of light shine

on a view of mistrust

and darkness of deceit



Senyru contest...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bien Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 11:23 AM
phenomenal!! Good write JB (JoAnne)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 2:19 PM
A good definition Michael .. believe the contest was judged this morning luv..enjoyed your inspiration today in this piece...
Neels Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 2:21 PM
I likey your entry. Best wishes for the contest ;) luv W
Stella Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 7:11 AM
oh yes this should be in winners circle my friend at this time even that glimmer would make me rethink values also thanks again for your kind comments keep up the great work enjoyed the read blessings and hope this was fictional
Knop Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 4:04 AM
Wish you best of luck with this great Senryu ma friend! Really enjoyed the read!...Gert
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September 18, 2010 at 10:57 AM
Good luck in the contest. Light conquers all darkness. Trust is just a misguided weakness we all have and need. Enjoyed,..p.d.
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