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Terror On Night Train

Night train skids off tracks;
it crashes into shacks...  
no easy escape.

It's nightmare or dream? 
All passengers scream...
train plunges into lake.

Copyright © Andrew Crisci | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown

May 17, 2012 at 1:51 PM

A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Andrew. Love, Carol

May 15, 2012 at 6:28 PM

Both of us with nightmares!! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

May 15, 2012 at 5:01 AM

smashing piece, andrew... congrats on your win!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

May 14, 2012 at 8:33 PM

wow, you did GREAT with this challenge. Glad I finally am seeing this one, and congrats on your win, Andrew

May 14, 2012 at 6:16 PM

Congrats on your win, Andy. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

May 14, 2012 at 2:47 PM

Congrats on your winning place in the tail-rhyme contest.. A sad poem...

May 14, 2012 at 11:23 AM

That's really terrible.Very good Tail Rhyme.Congrats on your win.

May 14, 2012 at 11:21 AM

Andrew congrats on your win..David

May 14, 2012 at 11:02 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrew!!! Big hugs, deb

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

May 14, 2012 at 10:46 AM

Congrats on your win Andre xxw

May 14, 2012 at 10:10 AM

A sinking feeling... Terry

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