Terrestrial Journals Iv

Intriguing this swaying candles flame, trying to convince myself tis but, an aladdins lamp?!

Whispering these words with an amulets charms, dangling about its waist; a world of visions

Kept in this alabasters oblong box; scented aneath rosemary sage and mystic lay with

Incantations butterflies swirling amid the fire of narrations ellipses stage; candles flames

Trying to convince itself tis an aladdins lamp; offering a world in myoptic, bipolar wishes!?

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....“Terrestrial Journals” *
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 2, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Whoa. Love the ending!! This one gives one vivid imagery -- at least for me. Very nicely done. Always, Laura
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