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Terracotta Ocher

Orangey, burnt almond hues color the horizon; as Sol's chariot like a spent ember, glows amber; inking infinite ice crystals with a coppery terracotta ocher; as it arches and sets.
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Watt Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Gorgeous word play, splashes of color, a description of the sun's movement ("Sol's chariot / arches by"), well-deserving of your #1 placement, Emile. Congratulations ~ John
Pinet Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 6:45 PM
Thanks John, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Ibeh Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 4:18 PM
Such a superb, atmospheric Yalto, Emile:-) You're definitely a master at my form! Congratulations on first place win, bud.
Pinet Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 6:44 PM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your comments and I love your form my friend, Emile.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 4:07 PM
An awesome piece with a beautiful flow that is so mesmerizing, Emile, worthy for 1st place, my grateful thanks for your participation, Aloha William
Pinet Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 6:43 PM
Thanks so much William, I appreciate the placement and your encouraging comments my friend, Emile.
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