Terracotta Ocher

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Orangey, burnt almond hews color the horizon; as Sol's chariot like a spent ember, glows amber; inking infinite ice crystals with a coppery terracotta ocher; as it arches and sets.

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John Watt

Date: 4/1/2020 5:35:00 PM

Gorgeous word play, splashes of color, a description of the sun's movement ("Sol's chariot / arches by"), well-deserving of your #1 placement, Emile. Congratulations ~ John

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2020 6:45:00 PM

Thanks John, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/1/2020 4:18:00 PM

Such a superb, atmospheric Yalto, Emile:-) You're definitely a master at my form! Congratulations on first place win, bud.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2020 6:44:00 PM

Thanks Edward, I appreciate your comments and I love your form my friend, Emile.

Hilo Poet

Date: 4/1/2020 4:07:00 PM

An awesome piece with a beautiful flow that is so mesmerizing, Emile, worthy for 1st place, my grateful thanks for your participation, Aloha William

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2020 6:43:00 PM

Thanks so much William, I appreciate the placement and your encouraging comments my friend, Emile.