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Terra Firma

When both my feet don’t touch the ground Lightheadedness proves overwhelming Turbulent thoughts going while coming They swirl about me round and round Cloaked in black a moonless night The howling dreadful spiteful wind prevails Spellbound drags me over hills and vales Like a ragdoll in the midst of a bullfight Trails of lingering spirit ghouls Hover over murky haze of mistiness Harassing in dark gloomy cloudiness Wrangling reaping mangled souls Blurry visions twirl above Creating mayhem in their path Unleashing bold raging wrath Till afar I think I see a dove Fearing I’ll break into a coma I force myself to get a grip Catch my breath with every dip Holding out for familiar terra firma AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on February 6, 2019 for contest ENCLOSED RHYME sponsored by EMILE PINET

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Date: 2/7/2019 10:00:00 PM
firma - solid... terra - grounded … poem! G.L. in the contest, Line! ~ Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/7/2019 11:07:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/7/2019 2:18:00 PM
You've expressed quite well the difficulty of lacking solidity. Well penned and good luck in the contest.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/7/2019 2:39:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, ML.
Date: 2/7/2019 4:28:00 AM
Delightfully mystical, and poetically wonderful, Line. "spellbound drags me over hills and vales like a ragdoll in the midst of a bullfight" - this part was a definite wake up line. I do not need to have coffee today.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/7/2019 8:23:00 AM
LOL thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Caren.
Date: 2/6/2019 10:31:00 PM
A FAV for me. Very POEish. Love it
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/6/2019 10:38:00 PM
What a lovely compliment. Thank you so much, Timothy.

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