Tense Like Cactus 3
Have you ever thought
with an iced mind
its worse than swimming
in shallow water.
A coin received in hard days
Is like a cactus plant in the desert
An open mind Is bearable
like the leaves of a tree
useful to man and the soil
The days when you make a mistake
And your achievements sunk
to the existence of a zombie
among the living.
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