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Tenderly Crushed Grapes

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Len Gasun

Date: 5/24/2013 12:34:00 AM

This is a great chain of haiku my dear friend Russell! I'm so happy to read it once again today! Congratulations once more on your awesome win my friend! love and big hugs, Leonora

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/20/2013 11:20:00 PM

I congratulate you on the placement here Russell i also enjoyed reading this entry..' Joe..)

Donna Jones

Date: 5/19/2013 6:56:00 PM

Awwww yes the romance....congratulations Russell

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/19/2013 2:40:00 PM

Russell congratulations on your win. It's a well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/19/2013 1:59:00 PM

Hello my friend, congratulations for the very well deserved Honorable Mention, as usual excellent poetry. Love T.

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/19/2013 5:54:00 AM

A sweet magic out of intoxication of red wine drink wonderfully adorned. Wish you a great congratulation on your win. Loved always.....,bl

Len Gasun

Date: 5/19/2013 2:18:00 AM

My heartfelt congratulations on your win my dear friend Russell. So glad to read and comment on this for the second time. This is really awesome! So love it! Thank you so much for sharing and again for taking time to read my works leaving me wonderful and inspiring comments. More blessings to you and good luck always! love and big hugs, Leonora

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/18/2013 10:34:00 PM

Congrats on your fine win Russell. I love the last haiku. AO

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/18/2013 8:29:00 PM

Russell, congratulations with your way 2 xool winning poem in Alfred's "Bacchus The God Who Loved His Grapes" contest. always~ Linda

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/18/2013 5:31:00 PM

interesting verse, Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2013 11:36:00 PM

by the way , my favorite is the last one about romance!

Len Gasun

Date: 5/2/2013 3:39:00 AM

Wow! I super like this haiku of yours my very dear friend and one of my fav. poets, Russell. You really did it very well! A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing and my awesome win in your contest. It's my great honor. Million thanks for everything! love lots, Leonora

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/1/2013 11:16:00 PM

I enjoyed your take on this contest Russell. I love to dine with wine. Best of luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2013 11:13:00 PM

gosh, you have a literal one and then two others that are direct contrasts. It will be fun to see who Alfred chooses for his winners in this unique contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/1/2013 11:07:00 PM

Dear Russell, each time I will drink wine, this is what I will think, especially the third part! I hope I will not get drunk! Beautiful!

Donna Jones

Date: 5/1/2013 9:52:00 PM

Wow...very Cool....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2013 4:34:00 PM

Interesting work..Reads like a winner to me...Enjoyed reading it tonight...That overly sour juice is interesting..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent at my work..Sara