Tender Winter

stars seem lighting lamps
moon plays gleaming glowing games ~
festival of lights

darkness paving way
to lights much reluctantly ~
breeze turns into storms

this tender winter
clings to the wombs of summer ~
Joey of kangaroo


21 October 2021
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Kamoonpuri Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Wow an impressive poem, first stanza a beautiful one on moon and stars and the next great in metaphoric comparison. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Alex Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:30 AM
Thank you very much.
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