Tender Loving Sweet

We would see each other standing there 
and know we were meant to be
you would have never guessed wed end up here 
forgetting who we are and everything we see.
I changed my life around 
i never even cried
the angel deep inside of me 
became the devil in your eyes.
the words you spoke to me
the darkness in your voice 
the creature living inside of you
became the demon ruling your life
you said you wouldnt hurt me 
like all the ones before
you said you would always love me
forever and ever more
you took your time to say this
wrote every line twice
making sure you had it perfect
even spoken in your sweetest voice
I cant believe your leaving
Everyone frozen in disbelief
that you could be so heartless
yet so tender loving and sweet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 27, 2010 at 10:51 PM
Such a heartheld write,, loved it, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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